IMO the shadow gives extra depth to the drawing and looks good. I agree with Blowhard's comment (and also with John's comment on BH's comment ).
However, you should make it straighter. Look at the photos posted by John. The shadow stays relatively straight. Your effect is too strong IMO and spoils the drawing.
I'm just putting the finishing touches to a re-worked version of this profile, and I'm looking for images of early Ib's with the white identifying marks on the nose, either all white or the horizontal stripe will do.
Also I have been unable to find a decent image of the fabric on the tail looks, any help, as usual will be appreciated.
oh...yeah, always on the look out for out of the ordinary Typhoon paint schemes if anybody has some on file.
Ferk me, this profile is rising 3 years old, I think I better finish it real soon!
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Last edited by GiantFlyingRobots; 15th January 2011 at 08:27.
Reason: now with historical detail.
I have moved this to another post as I seemed to be having trouble posting two images in the OP and tried to use my backup host, but that seems problematic as well.
Gamary, is there any particular area that you think could use further shape definition?