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Re: Another one to quibble over
Posting our work here gives us a chance to have fresh eyes look at it from a different viewpoint. The suggestions offered in these critiques are extremely helpful in allowing us to improve our work through their tutelage. John, also affectionately referred to as "that old fart Sagindragin", can often be seen doing this in various threads. Recently, Jester's-Ink was kind enough to review my work and provided some very insightful observations on a few areas in my work he felt could use some improvement. The following critique speaks for itself........
Last edited by Otterkins2; 18th June 2009 at 06:50.
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