hawker Tempest

santynus · #1 (**permalink**) 25th January 2007, 15:35

Hi all

I begin one new project the hawker Tempest

please comment and suggestion are welcome

Clave · #2 (**permalink**) 26th January 2007, 13:59

Looking good so far

The nose spinner may be slightly 'sharp' might be worth checking a few more pictures?...

kristorf · #3 (**permalink**) 26th January 2007, 14:09

I know nothing about profiles, but I would suggest softening the panel lines gooing through the invasion stripes.
At the moment they look as though they are on top of the paint, not under it.

santynus · #4 (**permalink**) 26th January 2007, 16:50

thank you Clave & kristorf for your comments

I make some new update after your suggestions... I hope now look beter

by the way the color prophile is not finish get... work in progress

santynus · #5 (**permalink**) 27th January 2007, 11:10

I make other update on my Tempest color profile I can say is finish... but I want try to make rivets and other effects...

Hawker Tempest MK.V (series 1) JN751/R-B flow by Wg Cdr R.P. Beamont, Wing leader, Newchurch Tempest Wing, June 1944

please comment and suggestion are welcome

adlabs6 · #6 (**permalink**) 27th January 2007, 19:54

Looking good. Though as Kristorf pointed out, perhaps the panel lines through the invasion stripes would do with some additional fading through there? Basically so the white stripes seem more continuous.

santynus · #7 (**permalink**) 29th January 2007, 01:43

I update my tempest with rivets and some new shadows and little effect on the pannel...

Clave · #8 (**permalink**) 30th January 2007, 22:41

Still have a slight concern about the nose...

santynus · #9 (**permalink**) 30th January 2007, 23:38

thank you for your suggestion Clave

I just make some new update on the fusolage and next the nose...

WarWolfe · #10 (**permalink**) 31st January 2007, 03:43

Now I'm no expert on the Tempest (Maybe one will pop in), but to me the panel lines still look to dark in some areas. I think it looks great so far.