Its very good but it looks like there is a chris-cross effect in the colours? Did you use a pencil filter on it? Also needs more shade underneath to give a good 3D effect, otherwise very good
Yes there is a sort of criss-cross effect on it, its a little more visible on the other version I have of it, I in******ently gave my profile a "cartoonish" quality to it, so I tried to apply a filter that would make it as though it was printed on comic book paper. Here is the other version, with the different background:
Yeah I noticed it was as bas as skinning. I started looking all over for blank line drawings of planes to do.
Actually I think this kind of thing can actually help me with skinning. Because here, I learned about lighting and shading, something which I only use sparingly in my skins.
About the shade though, I dont want to add too much, as the profile is already pretty dark. Maybe I should ad a filter to lighten it up some?
I make some little update on your color profile about shadow and lighting, I think you don't have to be scared to make so dark your profile I make a lot of color profile and I try ever new tecnique, some time I have good score some time no... you have to search you way for create your personal style
Very cool thanks. I notice that even though it is there, its quite subtle. I also notice you got rid of some of the black lines, especially around the canopy, it does make it look a little nicer. I have to ask how you did that though?
meybe you can use more shadow for make more 3d effect 
