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This is my first post, I attach my Hurricane color profile, is a

Mk.I - No.1 Squadron, Wittering, flown by Pilot Officer A. P. Clowes October 1940

I am pleased to receive all commets and suggestions for improving my work.

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Overall a very good looking profile.
But I do have some comments on details.
The Spinner looks like a rounded square with the current lighting.
The smoke is too much a thin solid line. I think you best study photo's for the exhaust.
The rigging also looks too square, especially at the fin and rudder.
It's cloth stretched around the ribs. So, actually you only see a bit of the ribs stick out. Look at these photo's to see how minimal the ribbing actually is with the Hurricane. In flight it will be a little more visible due to airflow.

With my drawing I try to make visible how your ribbing looks like vs how the ribbing should be.

I think the quality of the drawing is good enough to be picky on such details, since they give it a little unnatural look.

I've added a profile of Jesters that shows the shading that way. Though it maybe even might be more subtile to my taste.
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Hi Serval,
Thank you for your suggestion, this week end I try to update my color profile and I will repost it.
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Hi all
I revised my color profile and I hope it's better

Last time I atthach wrong files that wasn't correspond to airplane's descriptions

Now I've just atthached both color profiles together with correct descriptions

Hawker Hurricane MKI
- YB-J No.17 Squadron, Debden, September 1940

Hawker Hurricane MKI - JX-B No.1 Squadron, Wittering, flown by Pilot Officer A. P. Clowes October 1940

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Good improvements on the smoke, and the prop has a good roundness now also.
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Great improvements

Feel free to add them to the gallery if you like

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Hi adlabs6 & Serval
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