Superb, Jesters! You've managed the difference in shading between the inboard and outboard pylon quite well: there is a better sense of volume and distance. However, the uppersurface pylon carrying the AIM-9 now looks a bit bizarre because it's further away but lighter, which is not consistent with the technique you've applied.
I also think you can tone down this shading effect and still achieve what you were looking for.
What do you think, Supah? Shall we add Jesters to the list of potential jet superkings?

Surely he's worth it!