It looks very nice!
Just at first glance a few things about the camouflage stand out. You may want to double check your photo reference. The splinter camouflage was not hard edged, not sprayed with masks, but had a tight feathered edge. It should but just a bit fuzzy, not so sharp. Also, I'd say the lower color demarcation is too fuzzy, but this is where photo reference comes in. If it looks that way in the photo or photos you are using, then that's good enough
Also check the colors. That is certainly supposed to be RLM 81 braunviolet? There were variations but I'd say your color is a bit too brown and rich.
Of course the green on 234s could be any of the late war greens. Probably 82 in this case?
So far it looks pretty solid
